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I hope you know
That this is not funny
And that I'm breaking

I hope you are aware
Of how unfair this is
That I'm in so much misery
It hurts to even breathe

What were you thinking?
That you could disappear
And I wouldn't feel a thing?
Well I'm dying
Just so you know

You can't expect me to be fine
As I don't expect you to show up
Though that won't change the fact
That your disappearance hurts

Nobody wipes my tears
No one chases my doubts away
But even worse than that
No one holds me tight
Saying everything will be alright

What will become of me?

If I take a pencil,
It writes your name
As if it had a will of its own

If I go to sleep,
My mind summons your face
And you dance in my thoughts
For the rest of the day

Everything just everything
Reminds me of you
I can't keep living this way

Loving, Missing, Wanting You
Just Thughts...
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kevinlee11 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The descriptions of the speaker's emotions for his (lost) lover convey a lonely tone. That, coupled with the visual imagery of the things that make the speaker remember her come together to make a very nice poem. I like it :)
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NicolaWingedDeity Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I appreciate that a lot. And yes, It was written in very lonely moments thus why the tone. Thanks Again(:
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kevinlee11 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome
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